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Jessica Michelle Barber
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I like the ending of this story and the subject is quite original. This is not a critique site so I suggest you submit it to one and let them assist you in a little polish and it should be accepted readily.
Jessica, I truly enjoyed your write from beginning to end. It reminded me of a Twilight Zone episode. Well done !!! I would have a professional proof reader give it a look. Some sentences and wording needs to be adjusted.
Thanks for posting and I lo…
The last line "did you fall on a star or trip on a cloud?" really is vivid for me. The imagery and the different meanings behind it really add to what you were doing during the rest of the poem. Well done!
This is the best work that I've completed so far. Let me know what you think.
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A little about myself...
I am a student at Winthrop University right now, and I'm studying to be a high-school English teacher.
Right now, I really have become fascinated with depicting horror and mental illness through my short stories, and I've been thinking about branching out into poetry.
Right now, I really have become fascinated with depicting horror and mental illness through my short stories, and I've been thinking about branching out into poetry.
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- At 5:11am on February 8, 2010,
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there was pain, and there was sanity,god above, there,in a browncollected light,i was never much for experiencesthe love that feels for most, had never felt for me,the exploding friends at nightand the highlighted neonconversations that prove to be…
Thankyou Mr. Fidan.
Oesophagus brewing up a burning for my chest,
Knotting and kneading like a fist within my breast,
Swallowing bile before it reaches my teeth,
Harrowing smile tries to cover the grief.
Itching, flinching, wishing I knew more
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